What will it take?

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What will it take

For you to see me

As not a shadow of her

Or a fragment of him?

Will my pride suffice?

Or will my giving up be the price

Will you then see me?

For who I am,

For who I always was

Simply Me


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2 Comments Add yours

  1. I think all it takes
    Is a closed eye
    And an open mind
    A numb memory
    A wide awakening
    And a shudder
    At realizing
    This was all
    I wanted…

    Your poem is lovely..

    Liked by 1 person

    1. cias911 says:

      Wow I love your take on this …its so much better !! 😁

      Like

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